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ROUZBEH SOHANI گفت...

salam
aval bayad babate frsi naneveshtanam mazerat bekham
ke ye jourai barmigarde be emkanate inja va albate estedade man.
amma mikhastam dota matlab dar morede kare douste khoubam hoseyne janat makan begam:
aval dar morede negahi taghriban shbih be negahe TAGHLILGERAYANE
dar shere va be tore moshakhas dar in kar.
in negah dar morede mafahim pasokhi be sourate CHIZI NIST MAGAR erae midahad
be onvane mesal:
MOUSIGHI CHIST?
javab:
MOUSIGHI CHIZI NIST MAGAR ERTEASHATE HAVA
ke hozoure negahi shabih be in dar sher baese hozoure ghodratmande tafakor va tasmimgirie moalef dar asar mishavad=dour shodan ekhtiare mokhatab
negahi shabih be in ra dar digar karhai ke dar veblog gharar gerefte ham mishavad jostojoo kard
dar in kar:
KHORSHID HASTAM
GHOLE HASTAM
KHAKESTARE YEK KONDEYE PIR HASTAM
chizhai ke moalef khaste bashad
va mokhatab agar mikhahad shakhsan be kar vared shavad nachar ast bepazirad
nokteye dovom estefade az tashbih
ke baz ham etefaghist az zaviyeye ehsase moalef ke be mokhatab tahmil mishavad
YANI BE NAZARE MOALEF CHIZI SHABIH BE CHIZI DIGAR AST DAR HALI KE BE NAZARE MOKHATABHAYE GOONAGOON MOMKEN AST CHENIN NABASHAD.
choon ensanha dar barkhord ba ashyae piramoun az zavie dide shakhsie khodeshan peyravi mikonand.ke hamin baese ijad tafavot dar bardashtha az yek etefaghe moshabeh mishavad
BE ONVANE YEK MESALE SADE HATA DAR MOREDE NEGAH KARDAN BE YEK SHEY AFRAD BAR ASASE MOGHEIATE GHARARGIRI GHEZAVATHAYE MOTAFAVETY KHAHAND DASHT(YEK FIL AZ DOUR KHEYLI KOUCHAK AMA AZ NAZDIK...)
(VA YA BE ONVANE MESALI DIGAR MAFHOOMI BE ONVAN SARMA DAR MOREDE ASHKHASE MOKHTALEF AST VA MAFAHIME DIGARI AZ IN DAST)
inha tamaman mabahesi hastand dar hozeye falsafe ke binahayat be dorost andishidan/zendegi/sher/... komak khahand kar
va tarhe anha be zaman va bahshaye besyari niaz darad KE in tanha goushei basyar nachiz boud.
be omide bahsha va nazarhaye bishtar.